Friday 8 June 2018

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My name is Oliver. I live in Gisborne. I live with my brothers  and my mum.I grew up in Fiji for 6 years.

I play football every Saturday morning That's what I'm good at and what I like to do. My goals for this year to improve my writing and my football kicks. At the end of the year I am looking forward to going to Fiji to see my dad.

School was different in Fiji because I went for a day and they didn't listen as much as here and they didn't correct any spelling mistakes.

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  1. Miss Johnston22 June 2018 at 09:51

    Oliver. What an interesting life you have had so far.

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  2. Anonymous22 June 2018 at 11:07

    I really like how u explain how Fiji has a different school than Gisborne schools. But next time can u like explain more about your goals in learning but that was good writing.

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